Narrative for music video

Here is the overall narrative for our music video:

• The music video begins at a sleepover where the girl is telling a 'spooky' story to her friends. Then the camera zooms into the book and it jump cuts to the story told.
• The main girl opens a tin which includes a picture of the boy then she packs, writes a note then leaves home to find the boy and it is raining outside.
• The narrative cuts back to the sleepover scene and the girls friends are teasing her and then they drown and rip up the photo of the boy and throw it away.
• The video then cuts to the band playing for some of the chorus then for the other part of the chorus it goes back to the sleepover. 
• It then switches back to the story being told and the main girl is looking around where she meets the boy and cannot find him. Instead she finds a flannel shirt belonging to him. She begins to worry and makes her way home and clutches hugs the shirt hoping nothing bad has happened to him.
• The narrative then cuts back to the sleepover to the girl telling the 'spooky story'.
• Suddenly it cuts back to the main girl but she is going mad with stress and worry.
• Finally it goes back to the sleepover scene and the candles are blown out to signify the end.